Fascinating approach here. Framing this through the spectator's POV adds psychological weight that the original myth might not carry. I've seen similar translations from myth to meter flatten the weirdness, but keeping that visceral confusion (the quaking ground, the fever dream quality) makes the cosmic stuff feel genuinly threatening rather than just grand.
Thanks. POV is everything (in a way, Rashomon taught us that). But, in terms of the grunt work of actually converting the original to a more structured meter, AI was incredibly productive, and allowed me to be more editor than wordsmith.
Fascinating approach here. Framing this through the spectator's POV adds psychological weight that the original myth might not carry. I've seen similar translations from myth to meter flatten the weirdness, but keeping that visceral confusion (the quaking ground, the fever dream quality) makes the cosmic stuff feel genuinly threatening rather than just grand.
Thanks. POV is everything (in a way, Rashomon taught us that). But, in terms of the grunt work of actually converting the original to a more structured meter, AI was incredibly productive, and allowed me to be more editor than wordsmith.